Thursday, May 6, 2010

maybe this week is better!

Hi folks. sorry I'm a little late with this weeks blog but my printer died yesterday and I had to hold the funeral. Anyway I took last weeks poem to a workshop and got some advice to make changes. let me know what you think .

A- Maying
By Lawrence R. Berger
Flowers bloom in their natural state
and people begin to shed their winter coats
trees bud and fill the air with their fragrance.
Who would have thought that life goes on so easily ?
It was not always so.
In years past the first of may has been dreary
and drenched in rain .
so enjoy the sun !
let the children frolic as they might
till winter comes again and we sit by the fire
entwined in each others arms letting the snow take care of itself.
see you next week.

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