Wednesday, January 21, 2009

inquriries part two

hi folks: I just adjusted the links in this blog so you should be able to leave comments. let me know if I've got more then one person reading this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here's this weeks poem:

Clean him up!
By Lawrence R.Berger
Hey folks come hear the news
I've got some
couplets and a few Haiku's
with free verse tell me how can you lose
when there's a poet on the floor.
Sonnets and Villenells
pour out of Gents and Bells
all hopping their Cd's and books sell
and make them a poet on the floor.
I've been to every venue for miles around
some more than once and I've found
that some can be friendly and others mean
but you just can't escape from that dammed
espresso machine
so I sing
Hey folks come hear the news
I've got some couplets and a few haiku's
with free verse tell me how can you lose
when there's a poet on the floor.
(c) 2000 first recorded in Dragon's dance volume one
tell me what you think. see you next week.

4 comments:

Joe Langen said...

Hi Larry,
As you know I'm not a big poetry critic. What I do like is that your themes are consistent with your self description as a street poet and relate to everyday experiences. Best of luck with your blog.
Joe Langen

groovyacousticsoul said...

Those damned espresso machines! Happy days to you.

Jason

Anonymous said...

Thanks for the Ha-ha today, Larry!

Karla

Igraine said...

I will read. I will. I will.